Saturday, March 10, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 13 Caught Stealing

Today's photo is me about to eat up my brother's hand-made bread. XD


Actually I didn't eat up. I had a slice though, and it was goood :) My brother is a good cook, unlike me. ;P
It's been a while since I messed up with Picnik. I tried to make the picture look as if I am caught in a surveillance camera. :) I look a bit guilty, don't I? 

Friday, March 9, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 12 Compass

Today's picture.

I was doodling on my notebook last night. I kinda got stuck in my story.

And sometimes you just feel like you've lost your compass.
Not just of my story project.



Thursday, March 8, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 11 Acupucture

Today's photo is me just getting out of an acupuncture clinic.
How am I ever going to live without acupuncture? X)
For me, it does not kill my pain entirely, but relieves it. Sometimes it relieves it a lot.
Today I felt pretty good after the treatment and decided to take a shot. :)


By the way, the lighting in this corridor is... kinda good, huh.... -_-*

Wednesday, March 7, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 10 Insomnia

I had a terrible insomnia last night. 
I fell asleep around 1 and woke up before 3. I tried to sleep for a couple of hours, but failed and decided to get out of my bed.
This means that my body is going to be much worse than usual.
So I am skipping my morning class today.
But I've done the readings, so I guess I can catch up with the class materials just fine. :)
Insomnia days--well, strictly speaking, I couldn't sleep without sleeping pills for the last four years, so I am an insomniac--are pretty challenging. I need to deal with a different level of pain than usual (but I don't bother to enumerate the list here........... it'll be kinda boring :P) 
But for now, I think I am going to be okay.
I will study or write a bit, then after a few hours try to fall asleep again. :) 



The sun hasn't come up yet. But there are always lights.


My desk last night. Oh dear I mess up. :) This is how I work best though ;P


I found this quote last night. I think it is very insightful and helpful. 
It changes the way I see myself and my future. :)


Life is not about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself."
George Bernard Shaw

Tuesday, March 6, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 9 Working, Working

Today's photo: me working on my story project!
So far it is going well..... But it's just a beginning, and honestly I am excited and a bit scared at the same time. :P


 

I wrote "BORING BORING" over and over again here. 
I was brooding about how to make my story special.... and not a cliché. 


Preliminary sketch of the relationships among my main characters.



Oh, by the way, here is a glimpse of my little project that's been going on for about... two weeks.
I call it "A Mark A Day." Kinda lame, I know. Basically I press my lips on a post-it at the end of the day and draw lines around it and scribble today's weather and main events. This is yesterday's diary.


The sky was so bright yesterday. I thought the spring was finally coming. Only it was -13 degrees Celsius.

(campus, bus stop)


Sometimes I doodle a bit more. Above red line and smudged watercolor is my hand. X)


And this is me in a ghost costume (?). :D









Monday, March 5, 2012

#1. A Picture of Me A Day - Day 8 Old Writings

After some thought, I decided to do this project again -- a picture of me a day.
I began to work on my writing (I mean, I always have, but more actively this time, to actually "produce" something instead of planning all along), and while I am getting used to that project, I'd like to keep this 365 project relatively effortless.

But of course I will have fun at the same time!

Today's photo is me working on my story project #21: Offstage.
I was going over my writings in 2010 and making comments and stuffs.




Do you know that when you read your previous writings you are both absolutely appalled and amused? :/



My Moleskine notebook. Black ink from 2010 fall, blue ink from today.

Sunday, March 4, 2012

#3. Reading The Elements of Style - Day 7 (Final Day!)

I think it is great to have seven-day projects, because you can produce or finish something in a week, don't get bored, and begin another exciting project for the next week!
Maybe someday I'll do a project for a longer period of time, but for now I'm pretty content with it :)

This is my final day of studying Strunk & White's The Elements of Style. The book was very helpful!


Chapter IV. A Few Matters of Form

Headings


Numerals: do not spell out dates or other serial numbers, but write them in figures or in Roman notation.
   - Example. August 9, 1918       Chapter XII      Rule 3

Parentheses: punctuation outside of the marks of parenthesis!

Quotations


References: abbreviate titles that occur frequently.
   - Example. After the killing of Polonius, Halmet is placed under guard (IV. ii. 14).

Titles: use italics! - Example. The Iliad; the Odyssey; A Tale of Two Cities; (but omit or The when you place the possessive before them:) Dickens's Tale of Two Cities.








Chapter V. Words and Expressions Commonly Misused

(Not necessarily bad English, but better be replaced)

All right = "Agreed" or "Go ahead." In other uses better avoided.

As good or better than: correct this type of expression by rearranging the sentence.
   - Example. My opinion is as good or better than his. 
              --> My opinion is as good as his, or better (if not better).
As to whether (gosh I use this a lot!): Whether is sufficient. (wow!)

Bid: bid-bade. Takes the infinitive without to.


Case: not often necessary.
   - Example: In many cases, the rooms were poorly ventilated. 
              --> Many of the rooms were poorly ventilated. 
   - Example: It has rarely been the case that any mistake has been made.
              --> Few mistakes have been made.

Certainly: certainly and very are often used indiscriminately. Avoid mannerism. Also applies to nature.

Character: often simply redundant. Example. Acts of a hostile character --> Hostile acts (neat!)

Claim, vb.: better be used "claimed to be..." than "claimed that.." Not a substitute for declare, maintain, or charge.


Compare: (Yes, I hoped it will come up! So confusing)
   - compare to: point out or imply resemblances, between objects regarded as essentially of different order.
   - compare with: mainly to point out differences, between objects regarded as essentially of the same order.
   - Example. Life has been compared to a pilgrimage, to a drama, to a battle.
                    Congress may be compared with the British Parliament. 
                    Paris has been compared to ancient Athens; it may be compared with modern London.

Clever: overused. Best restricted to ingenuity displayed in small matters.

Consider: NOT followed by as when it means, "believe to be." (Really?!)
   - Example. I consider him thoroughly competent.
   - Compare. The lecturer considered Cromwell first as soldier and second as administrator.
      --> in this case, "considered" means "examined" or "discussed."

Dependable: a needless substitute for reliable, trustworthy.

Due to: incorrectly used for through, because of, or owing to. Example. He lost the first game, due to carelessness.
In correct use related as predicate or as modifier to a particular noun. Example. This invention is due to Edison. / Losses due to preventable fires. 
Actually, I didn't get the meaning of this, so I looked up my bookshelf, and it said:
Usage Note: Due to has been widely used for many years as a compound preposition like owing to, but some critics have insisted that the adjectival status of due must be retained. According to this view, it is incorrect to say The concert was canceled due to the rain, as opposed to the acceptable The cancellation of the concert was due to the rain, where due continues to function as an adjective modifying cancellation.
Excerpted from The American Heritage(r) Dictionary of the English Language, Third Edition (c) 1996 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Electronic version licensed from INSO Corporation; further reproduction and distribution in accordance with the Copyright Law of the United States. All rights reserved.
Ehh.... okay....? Still confused, but moving on to the next one:

Etc.: Not to be used of persons. Equivalent to and the rest, and so forth, and hence not to be used if one of these would be insufficient.

Factor: A hackney! Replace it with something more direct and idiomatic.
   - Example. Heavy artillery is becoming an increasingly important factor in deciding battles. 
              --> Heavy artillery is playing a larger and larger part in deciding battles. 

Feature: A hackneyed word like factor.

However: (Yes! here it comes!)
In the meaning nevertheless, NOT to come first in its sentence or clause.
   - Example. The roads were almost impassable. However, we at last succeeded in reaching camp. 
              --> The roads were almost impassable. At last, however, we succeeded in reaching camp.
When however comes first, it means in whatever way or to whatever extent.
   - Example. However discouraging the prospect, he never lost heart.
Oh now I get it. :)

Kind of/Sort of: NOT to be used as a substitute for rather. Restrict it to its literal sense.
   - Example. Amber is a kind of fossil resin. / I dislike that kind of notoriety.

Phase: Means a stage of transition or development: "the phases of the moon;" "the last phase."
Not to be used for aspect or topic (Ohhh..).
   - Example. Another phase of the subject --> Another point (another question)

Possess: Not to be used as a mere substitute for have or own.
   - Example. He possessed great courage. --> He had great courage (was very brave).
                    He was the fortunate possessor of --> He owned

State: Not to be used as a mere substitute for say, remark. Restrict it to the sense of express fully or clearly, as, "He refused to state his objections."

Viewpoint: Write point of view, but do not misuse this, as many do, for view or opinion.

While: Avoid the indiscriminate use of this word for and, but, and although. Best replaced by a semicolon.
   - Example. The office and salesrooms are on the ground floor, while the rest of the building is devoted to manufacturing. --> The office and salesrooms are on the ground floor; the rest of the building is devoted to manufacturing. 
But it is okay to be used as an equivalent of although when there is no ambiguity or absurdity in the sentence. Example. While I admire his energy, I wish it were employed in a better cause.

Worthwhile: Overworked as a term of vague approval and (with not) of disapproval. Strictly applicable only to actions: "Is it worthwhile to telegraph?"
   - Example. His books are not worthwhile. --> His books are not worth reading (not worth one's while to read; do not repay reading).
Don't use it before a noun: "a worthwhile story."





Chapter VI. Words Often Misspelled
privilege, sacrilegious, parallel, playwright :)


I think I need to go over this many times till I get used to them.
Anyway, THE END!! HORRAY!! What shall I do for the next project?!